i started reading that story yesterday when you posted the link... i'm on ch 8 and so far i really like it. its a very different take on the original and in some sick way its almost more realistic.
I haven't started it yet cause I'm in the middle of "city of bones" but everyone that has read it, is hooked... they add a new chapter like every wednesday or something.
i read the whole thing and loved it... but i think shes going to be ending it... shes gonna write ch 50 and an epilogue and thats it... i'm sad just thinking about it.